EA\ED申請(qǐng)被退回時(shí)我們?cè)趺崔k？

各位正在奮戰(zhàn)期末考的同學(xué)辛苦了！

相信有些同學(xué)已經(jīng)收到EA/ED大學(xué)錄取的好消息，并苦惱要選擇哪一所學(xué)校，在此先恭喜你們喔！

但是還是有一些同學(xué)可能被EA/ED的學(xué)校eferre或拒絕，也請(qǐng)不要失望。EA/ED的申請(qǐng)本身就比較激烈，但學(xué)校只能開(kāi)放一定的錄取名額。因此并不是你自己本身學(xué)術(shù)或課外活動(dòng)不夠好，只是學(xué)校以目前的名額做策略性的錄取而已。

Defining College Deferrals

首先，什么是College Deferrals? Deferral通常是指你的申請(qǐng)還沒(méi)結(jié)束，學(xué)校在EA/ED的環(huán)節(jié)覺(jué)得你的申請(qǐng)材料不錯(cuò)，但是提前申請(qǐng)的名額有限，因此把你的申請(qǐng)文件推送至一般申請(qǐng)環(huán)節(jié)重新審閱，這時(shí)候?qū)?huì)把12年級(jí)的成績(jī)與額外的課外活動(dòng)一并考量進(jìn)去。通常將會(huì)在三月或四月時(shí)取得最后錄取通知。

如果你是Early Decision (ED)申請(qǐng)被推送，那你的資格將會(huì)被從BiningCommitment限制條約中被解除。

有時(shí)候?qū)W生會(huì)覺(jué)得申請(qǐng)文件被退送至一般申請(qǐng)環(huán)節(jié)會(huì)很沮喪，但是申咨詢師要鼓勵(lì)大家這并不代表完全沒(méi)有希望了。你的申請(qǐng)文件仍然在審理階段，下面我提供一些小技巧可以增加一些錄取的機(jī)率。

Making a Goo Impression

****如果你仍然對(duì)于此大學(xué)有相當(dāng)大的興趣，這時(shí)候你可以提供額外的資料去讓學(xué)校知道為什么你如此喜歡這所學(xué)校與你將會(huì)提供什么材料與證明。請(qǐng)記住，這時(shí)候所使用的語(yǔ)言需要以尊重的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)明，同時(shí)表現(xiàn)自己的熱誠(chéng)但又不失禮節(jié)。

1.詳細(xì)閱讀Deferral Letter內(nèi)的說(shuō)明

請(qǐng)?jiān)敿?xì)的閱讀信件上的說(shuō)明，遵守信上的規(guī)定與步驟。請(qǐng)記住，如有些學(xué)校要求“ you shoul not sen in any aitional information”時(shí)，請(qǐng)就不要再寄送任何新文件。

2.寄送補(bǔ)充文書(shū)

以下咨詢師提供一個(gè)補(bǔ)充文書(shū)范本，請(qǐng)記住此時(shí)是表現(xiàn)你為何對(duì)此學(xué)校有興趣，并針對(duì)學(xué)術(shù)上與課外活動(dòng)上的補(bǔ)充。請(qǐng)不要重復(fù)列舉已經(jīng)繳交的文書(shū)內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)?jiān)诩乃椭芭c輔導(dǎo)咨詢師再次確認(rèn)內(nèi)容與文法。以下幾點(diǎn)可以參考的方向?yàn)椋?/p>

學(xué)術(shù)活動(dòng)更新：

a. 期中與期末考試成績(jī)，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)化考試成績(jī)

b. 額外學(xué)術(shù)競(jìng)賽，研究報(bào)告

c. 參與大學(xué)學(xué)術(shù)活動(dòng)

課外活動(dòng)更新：

a. 社團(tuán)競(jìng)賽表現(xiàn)

b. 社會(huì)福利貢獻(xiàn)與服務(wù)

c. 遞交補(bǔ)充成績(jī)

請(qǐng)記得與學(xué)校咨詢師安排寄送最新的學(xué)校內(nèi)成績(jī)與標(biāo)準(zhǔn)化考試成績(jī)。請(qǐng)注意，如成績(jī)較低請(qǐng)就不要寄送更新了！

3.安排額外面試 (如需要)

有時(shí)候?qū)W校在之前EA/ED申請(qǐng)環(huán)節(jié)內(nèi)提供面試機(jī)會(huì)但未參加者，這時(shí)可以安排面試，面試者將會(huì)提供最新的反饋給學(xué)校招生處。

最后，如果被學(xué)校錄取了，請(qǐng)記得寄送一封感謝信給學(xué)校，這是學(xué)生都忘記做的事情。

補(bǔ)充文書(shū)范本

以下是補(bǔ)充文書(shū)的范本，請(qǐng)記住，此謹(jǐn)此為范本請(qǐng)勿直接抄襲。

第一段：Introuction 介紹自己

此地方必須讓學(xué)校的招生官知道你是誰(shuí)，什么時(shí)候?qū)懙男偶?。你也可以提到你?duì)此Deferral很失望，但是請(qǐng)確保用詞正向并清楚表達(dá)為何你對(duì)此學(xué)校的興趣。

Ms. Anne Smith

Associate Director of Amissions

Columbia University

1130 Amsteram Avenue

New York, NY 10027

Dear Ms. Smith,

Thank you for returning my call on Monay (X-ate). Although beingeferre from Early Decision was a big isappointment, I‘m grateful that I still have the possibility to be part of theColumbia University Class of 2019. Columbia has been my first choice since Ivisite last fall. As someone who loves being challenge acaemically, I trulyenjoye seeing Professor Allen push his stuents in the Sociology of Genercourse I attene. I appreciate how involve Columbia stuents manage to bewhile still taking rigorous courses. The fact that I coul major in Sociologywhile getting to watch ozens of stuent prouctions an spen a semesterabroa in Argentina is truly thrilling. I know that I woul be an active partof the stuent boy.

第二段：Upates 個(gè)人更新

解釋你有任何學(xué)術(shù)上或課外活動(dòng)上的更新內(nèi)容，利用條列式的方式更新最新成就。請(qǐng)記住，不要重復(fù)先前在申請(qǐng)書(shū)上已經(jīng)列舉出來(lái)的活動(dòng)。

I woul like to upate you on my recent acaemic an extracurricularachievements. The following has occurre since I submitte my application inOctober:

In the most challenging acaemic program at St. Mary‘s High School, I receive five A’s in my APcourses (incluing AP Calculus) an one B+ in honors statistics in our secontrimester. I will continue to excel acaemically in my last trimester an willgrauate with high honors an in the top 5 percent of my grae.

In aition to my continue involvement with Habitat for Humanityan tutoring mile schoolers in the neighborhoo, my soccer team won ourregional tournament. I score the most goals in the league an was name MostValuable Player.

A portion of an article I wrote for our school newspaper, The St.Mary‘s Eagle, was publishe in our town’s localpaper, The Harris town Daily. I was aske to contribute an aitional pieceabout my volunteer work, an it will be feature next month.

第三段：Conclusion 總結(jié)

在總結(jié)部分，再次說(shuō)明為何你想去此學(xué)校。如果你有計(jì)劃接受條件式入學(xué)或等待名單，也在此內(nèi)說(shuō)明并感謝招生官的時(shí)間去重新審核你的申請(qǐng)文書(shū)。

I woul be honore to contribute to the Columbia community as awriter for the Columbia Spectator, an woul continue my volunteer work as atutor in New York City. It woul be thrilling to learn uner prestigiousprofessors an conuct research in the sociology epartment. If there is anyaitional information you nee, on’t hesitate to contact me at 646.657.5543 or cbrown@gmail.com. Thank you for yourtime an consieration. Columbia is my first choice for college. If accepte, Iwoul absolutely come to campus in the fall. There is no school I woul ratheratten.

Sincerely,

Claire Brown

St. Mary’s High School

Harristown, CT 25555

SS# 456 34 1770

WSE額外再提供另一位學(xué)生的補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明信內(nèi)容供各位同學(xué)參考。最后，不要過(guò)度失望或緊張，EA/ED只是申請(qǐng)環(huán)節(jié)內(nèi)的第一戰(zhàn)成果，并不代表整個(gè)過(guò)程都結(jié)束沒(méi)希望了。很多學(xué)生都是在RD一般申請(qǐng)內(nèi)被大學(xué)錄取的，加油！

April 6, 2017

To USC Unergrauate Amissions Office:

I recently receive the isappointing news that I was enie amissioninto USC. Unerstanably, with over 56,000 applicants, I know there were manyincreible applicants making it a ifficult ecision to choose whom to amit,which is why I’m grateful to be consiere after reviewing the new informationbelow.

I was unable to submit one of my ACT scores an hope that theattache scores will allow USC to re-evaluate my application. Furthermore, Iwoul like to highlight some aitional accomplishments.

Since the conversation of college began, my eyes were set on onningUSC Carinal an Gol. I imagine myself as an active member of a iversestuent population gathering new knowlege in the Department of PoliticalScience at Dornsife. Aitionally, my family is able to pay 100% of my tuitionan fees to USC, allowing USC to fun those not as privilege.. As someone whois committe to helping unerserve populations, I know the value of usingresources for the goo of others.

During my high school tenure, I was nominate numerous times for theprestigious Lion of the Month awar, foune two clubs, Transfer Lions Club anCaring Cupcakes, an serve in a leaership role in eight others. Outsie ofthe classroom, I obtaine my Girl Scouts Gol Awar by renovating an emptyrecreation room into a fully functional library an serve over 1,000cumulative hours en route to earning the awar for most community service hoursin my National Charity League chapter. Through these experiences, I have growninto a leaer, built meaningful, lifelong relationships, create a welcomingenvironment for incoming first-year an transfer stuents, avocate for theunerrepresente through the Law Magnet Program, an will continue tocontribute my love of service to the USC community.

As I reflect on my volunteer experiences, I realize that true richescannot be bought with money; instea, wealth is the ability to truly experiencea life of learning an giving. I want to begin my journey of becoming a globalchange maker at USC. I know theresources that USC provies will equip me with the necessary tools to become animpactful leaer, empowering me to continue serving both my immeiate anglobal communities. As a Trojan, I will cultivate an enrich my min an spiritan eicate my time an energy to leaving the worl a better place than when Ientere. I want to sincerely thank you for taking the time to reconsier myamission to USC an hope to commit as a Trojan in the near future!

Sincerely,

Applicant

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