雅思大作文怎么提高分?jǐn)?shù)
2023-09-08 13:46:59 來(lái)源:中國(guó)教育在線
現(xiàn)在留學(xué)的學(xué)生越來(lái)越多,留學(xué)可以開(kāi)闊眼界,也能學(xué)習(xí)不一樣的教育體制,而且國(guó)外名校眾多,教育水平也一流。下面小編就來(lái)和大家說(shuō)說(shuō)“雅思大作文怎么提高分?jǐn)?shù)”這個(gè)問(wèn)題
雅思 大作文怎么提高分?jǐn)?shù)
基礎(chǔ)差的同學(xué)(目前只有5分或者更低)永遠(yuǎn)是注意語(yǔ)法和表達(dá),如果你的目標(biāo)是6分(特別是你只有一個(gè)月的時(shí)間),不建議目標(biāo)考7分,下面是小編搜集整理的關(guān)于雅思大作文怎么提高分?jǐn)?shù)的資料,歡迎查閱。
1. 在雅思寫(xiě)作中使用同義詞進(jìn)行替換
使用雅思寫(xiě)作同義詞的好處在于首先可以向考官展示考生詞匯量的豐富,其次也可以使文章富有變化。因此,雅思寫(xiě)作同義詞的運(yùn)用是衡量雅思考生英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)很有力的標(biāo)準(zhǔn),考官認(rèn)同你的同時(shí),自然也會(huì)給你高分。請(qǐng)看下面的例子:
School teachers used to be the source of information. However,some people argue that teachers are not as important as before because there is an increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion
2. 在雅思寫(xiě)作中使用各種形式的同根詞進(jìn)行替換
雅思寫(xiě)作里面有很多同根詞,專(zhuān)家分析認(rèn)為,通過(guò)雅思寫(xiě)作單詞的變換來(lái)吸引閱卷者眼球并獲得高分是一個(gè)很好的辦法。一些單詞通過(guò)添加前綴或者后綴的方式可以衍生出很多新的詞匯。而使用這些雅思寫(xiě)作詞匯可以避免重復(fù)原文當(dāng)中的詞條,也可以向閱卷者展示你變化詞匯的技巧。
比如雅思寫(xiě)作中我們經(jīng)常會(huì)用到“知道”這個(gè)概念,我們可以用know這個(gè)詞以及它的其他形式和它們的同義詞來(lái)表示“知道”這個(gè)意思。
3. 在雅思寫(xiě)作中使用短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行替換
雅思寫(xiě)作中同樣可以擁有豐富的短語(yǔ),使用它們,可以準(zhǔn)確傳達(dá)原文中的信息。在一些特殊情況下,短語(yǔ)也可以作為增加字?jǐn)?shù)的方法。以下我們來(lái)看另外一個(gè)例子:
Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Do you support or oppose this statement.
雅思寫(xiě)作備考句型
1. not at all =not in the slightest 根本不
2. end up (doing sth ) 結(jié)束(做某事)
3 .make a mistake/mistakes in sth 在某方面出錯(cuò)
4 .later on 隨后
5. be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事
be afraid of doing sth/sb 害怕……
6. laugh at sb 嘲笑某人
7. take notes=write down the notes 做筆記
8 .make up 組成
9 .deal with=do with 處理
10. be angry with 對(duì)……感到生氣
11 .go by(時(shí)間)過(guò)去、消逝 Time goes by. 時(shí)間流逝
12. try one’s best to do sth 盡某人大努力做某事
13 .break off 突然終止;中斷
14. make flashcards 制作抽認(rèn)卡
15. make a vocabulary list制作詞匯表
16 .read aloud大聲讀 play the CD too loud把CD放開(kāi)大聲
17. practice doing sth 練習(xí)做某事
18. get the pronunciation right =pronounce right發(fā)音準(zhǔn)確
19 .specific advice/suggestions 詳細(xì)而精確的建議
20. memorize/recite the words背單詞
21. read the textbook讀課本
22 .English grammars英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法
23 .feel differently 覺(jué)的不同
24. frustrate sb = make sb frustrated 使某人沮喪
find sth frustrating 發(fā)現(xiàn)某事沮喪
25. get/be excited about激動(dòng) look excited看起來(lái)很激動(dòng)
an exciting match/game 一場(chǎng)刺激的比賽
26 .spoken/oral English英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)
27 .regard... as 把 …... 當(dāng)成/看作
regard sth as a challenge把某事視為挑戰(zhàn)
28. impress sb感動(dòng)某人 be impressed 被深深感動(dòng)
be impressed by sb 被某人感動(dòng);對(duì)...印象深刻
29.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth= have trouble/difficulty with sth 做某事有困難
30. look up the words in a dictionary用字典查閱單詞
雅思滿分作文語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn)
1 平行結(jié)構(gòu)多
Although I do not support an outright ban on such activities, I do feel that government should restrict or regulate these pursuits.
這句話考官用兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞調(diào)節(jié)語(yǔ)氣,詞匯準(zhǔn)確,而且修辭上頭韻的效果,大家多收集意思相近的動(dòng)詞,動(dòng)詞的排列是很體現(xiàn)語(yǔ)言水平的。
Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time
形容詞+名詞的排列,意思上表達(dá)全面,語(yǔ)感上佳。
The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests
名詞的排列特別注意下意思的遞進(jìn)。邏輯全面性的體現(xiàn)。
2 圍繞中心詞寫(xiě)出長(zhǎng)修飾
In fact it would be fair to maintain that if extreme sports were banned, then why not ban any activity which could be interpreted as harmful such as smoking, drinking or even eating junk food?
大家一定要培養(yǎng)賓語(yǔ)的擴(kuò)展能力,寫(xiě)出中心名詞后,用定語(yǔ)從句進(jìn)行修飾。這是英漢之間語(yǔ)言的大區(qū)別。英語(yǔ)是先給中心詞,后面加上修飾。中文習(xí)慣定語(yǔ)放在名詞的前面。文中中心詞是activity,后面是拓展部分。
3 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞多樣化處理
Rather than banning these sports, governments should ensure that companies who provide facilities for dangerous sports meet the required legal safety standards.
多個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞處理有兩種方式,一個(gè)是連接詞銜接,動(dòng)詞原形排列,一個(gè)非謂語(yǔ)表達(dá)(to do/doing/done)體現(xiàn)多樣性。但是,大家一定要注意非謂語(yǔ)的排列順序會(huì)有邏輯效果,所以要格外嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.
非謂語(yǔ)表達(dá)強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)果的邏輯。
4 插入語(yǔ)多見(jiàn)
If, for example, an individual decided to go parachute jumping, then the authorities should insist that he or she undergo sufficient training and supervision and, if necessary, obtain the legally required license
插入語(yǔ)是有難度的手藝,需要有積累,位置擺的要有講究。既要考慮語(yǔ)法,又要兼顧意思。需要長(zhǎng)期練習(xí)。
5 狀語(yǔ)處理
介詞是英語(yǔ)的靈魂,介詞引導(dǎo)狀語(yǔ)是考官的慣用手段。介詞的搭配和位置是英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的重點(diǎn)難點(diǎn),一個(gè)人對(duì)于介詞的駕馭直接體現(xiàn)語(yǔ)言水平。狀語(yǔ)可以豐富句意,意思上更加全面。這是語(yǔ)言嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)性,邏輯性的直接體現(xiàn)。主要是時(shí)間,地點(diǎn),方式,條件,目的等等。
One problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.(伴隨狀語(yǔ))
If there were easy-to
reach local sports centers, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of the screen every evening.(地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ))
This has the added benefit the parents and children often use them together just for fun which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.(at時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)細(xì)節(jié)展示)
As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.(as引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ))
6概念到具體的過(guò)程
The variety of spors that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.
細(xì)節(jié)化的展示是雅思作文的特點(diǎn)。從抽象到具體,從概括到細(xì)節(jié)。大家要學(xué)會(huì)這種演繹法的思路。
Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local counsel has done.
怎樣才能致勝雅思寫(xiě)作
閱讀不是指在內(nèi)容選擇上面的泛泛而讀,而是主攻貼近生活的實(shí)用性文章。閱讀有諸多好處,能在字斟句酌的過(guò)程中擴(kuò)寬思維,增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)感。同時(shí),讀的越多,腦子里面的材料庫(kù)就被擴(kuò)充的越豐富,臨到我們要用的時(shí)候,信手拈來(lái)的材料會(huì)讓我們寫(xiě)作少很多阻力。
一般情況下,我們上學(xué)時(shí)期的英語(yǔ)課堂閱讀文章講解,老師更多的是將眼光放到了重難點(diǎn)詞匯講解和語(yǔ)法分析上面,很少能從整體的文章行文結(jié)構(gòu)入手。這樣,同學(xué)們掌握的就是片面的關(guān)節(jié)知識(shí),不知道怎么將這些關(guān)節(jié)合理有序的連接到一起。因此上海市雅思培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)的老師認(rèn)為應(yīng)該在閱讀的過(guò)程中觸類(lèi)旁通,多分析行文結(jié)構(gòu),在例文的閱讀中吸取精華之處。
除此之外,閱讀生活類(lèi)的文章,要注意其中的一些特色詞匯及句子,很多時(shí)候我們的作文分?jǐn)?shù)不高就是因?yàn)檫B簡(jiǎn)單的詞都翻譯不來(lái)。劃出那也專(zhuān)業(yè)性名詞詞匯及詞組,以及典型語(yǔ)句,再加以背誦練習(xí),相信雅思寫(xiě)作業(yè)難不倒同學(xué)們的。
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